When I was a participant in the Eastern Iowa
Writing Project at Saint Ambrose University, I was encouraged to give many
writing styles a go. One of the
challenges was to write poetry. Now, I
am not a person who particularly cares for poetry. I’ve never read a book of poems for pleasure-
only for work/lesson design.
I hate free verse poetry. I’m terrible at writing
poems that rhyme; the few times I’ve attempted to write rhyming poems they ended
up sounding like they were written by Dr. Seuss on crack.
For me, the best way to write poem is with a
formula. And luckily for me, there are a
great many poem structures to use.
The poems I’m sharing today are called Lune
Poems. An American Haiku, if you will. Their structure can be thus: three words
on the first line, five words on the second line, and three words on the final
line. A three line poem. Easy enough.
Maybe. Here goes…
The Chapel at St. Ambrose
Serene peaceful blessed
The water of new life
Trickles through me
And this one, also written while in the chapel...
Mass
People sharing hope
Faith grows when properly nurtured
Love shines through
The chapel had just gone under major
renovations...
Remodeling
Clean and new
Smells of paint and plaster
Rebirth of space
And then this…
To Be a Writer
Courage conviction confidence
Soaking in all that surrounds
Just letting go
Also on that day, I wrote one that I didn’t
finish. Maybe you can help me with it.
The Eastern Sun
White and bright
Promising warmth and new life
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As you can see, I’m not a poet by any stretch
of the imagination. And I’m not even
sure if I’ve followed the formula correctly. I JUST now looked up the formula on
the internet and the sample poems I found actually created a complete sentence. Kinda like this one I wrote a minute ago, after the internet search:
Nest
From the top
of that old Oak
tree
baby birds
fly.
I make mistakes. Many mistakes. But it’s
because I have to stretch my writing bone, you know? And
that’s o.k. What are you trying to do
and making mistakes at? Keep at it.
Until next time, be good to yourself.
~Nadine
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