When I was a participant in the Eastern Iowa Writing Project at Saint Ambrose University, I was encouraged to give many writing styles a go. One of the challenges was to write poetry. Now, I am not a person who particularly cares for poetry. I’ve never read a book of poems for pleasure- only for work/lesson design.
I hate free verse poetry. I’m terrible at writing poems that rhyme; the few times I’ve attempted to write rhyming poems they ended up sounding like they were written by Dr. Seuss on crack.
For me, the best way to write poem is with a formula. And luckily for me, there are a great many poem structures to use.
The poems I’m sharing today are called Lune Poems. An American Haiku, if you will. Their structure can be thus: three words on the first line, five words on the second line, and three words on the final line. A three line poem. Easy enough. Maybe. Here goes…
The Chapel at St. Ambrose
Serene peaceful blessed
The water of new life
Trickles through me
And this one, also written while in the chapel...
People sharing hope
Faith grows when properly nurtured
Love shines through
The chapel had just gone under major renovations...
Clean and new
Smells of paint and plaster
Rebirth of space
And then this…
To Be a Writer
Courage conviction confidence
Soaking in all that surrounds
Just letting go
Also on that day, I wrote one that I didn’t finish. Maybe you can help me with it.
The Eastern Sun
White and bright
Promising warmth and new life
As you can see, I’m not a poet by any stretch of the imagination. And I’m not even sure if I’ve followed the formula correctly. I JUST now looked up the formula on the internet and the sample poems I found actually created a complete sentence. Kinda like this one I wrote a minute ago, after the internet search:
From the top
of that old Oak tree
baby birds fly.
I make mistakes. Many mistakes. But it’s because I have to stretch my writing bone, you know? And that’s o.k. What are you trying to do and making mistakes at? Keep at it.
Until next time, be good to yourself.